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Forget his name,
Forget his face,
Forget his kiss,
His warm embrace,
Forget the love you once knew,
Remember he has someone new,
Forget him when they played your song,
Remember when you cryed, all night long,
Forget how close you two were,
Remember he has chosen her,
Forget you memorized his walk,
Forget the way he used to talk,
Forget the things he used to say,
Remember he has gone away,
Forget his laugh,
Forget his grin,
Forget the dimples in his chin,
Forget the way he held you tight,
Remember he's with her tonight,
Forget the time that went so fast,
Forget the love that moved it's past,
Forget he said he'd leave you never
Remember that he's gone forever.


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                     Michéal ó Caiside.
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Submitted: March 19, 2008
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Just a new(ish) poem, they are getting worse with the years I think!!
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the flow and rhyming is nice.
not too much but just enough to give it added catchyyyy-nesssssss.
you also put your use of descriptive language to great work.
simple yet complete sounding.

great job (:

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"You can't quit until you try
You can't live until you die
You can't learn to tell the truth
Until you learn to lie"
-random lyrics
This is so sad. It's a beautiful poem that just hits the right spot with me. Maybe it's because I feel like I'm going through the same thing right now.

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by the way... I love Zukko!

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Guest_1788098: what do you think about the black sabbath tour?
Incubus: Dirk: Why'd they break up in the first place?
Brandon: Pure heshin' aggression. We will all cut our hair into mullets and wear checkered slip-on Vans in salute to the rock gods
Getting worse? That's bloody brilliant that is!! An-mháth ar fad!! XD

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:star:▀▄▀▄▀▄TopGearFan▀▄▀▄▀▄:star:
:music:"In the nights... dream delight, I want to see you smile again.":music:
Yeah, I was saying my poems NOW-a-days are worse, this is old enough, about two years I think :D

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O right. XD This is really good though.

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:star:▀▄▀▄▀▄TopGearFan▀▄▀▄▀▄:star:
:music:"In the nights... dream delight, I want to see you smile again.":music:
Thanks!! I am glad people like my poetry!

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Please leave all overcoats canes and, top hats, with the doorman, from that moment you'll be out of place and underdressed.

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Thanks, I wrote it when I was feeling very sad because of someone. I won't say who though! That made me very sad. :(

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Thanks. I like that you like! Hehehehe :D

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Please leave all overcoats canes and, top hats, with the doorman, from that moment you'll be out of place and underdressed.

Name the artist and get a cookie!! :cookie:

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